Teturo's Fanfiction notes

New Work

2010-06-22T10:44:00.000-07:00

It has been a while so I thought I would go ahead and post one of my new pieces of artwork here

2010-02-27T13:21:00.000-08:00

Long Silence

2009-09-04T09:59:00.001-07:00

I have not posted anything here in a while so I thought I should at least say why.

I have completely lost my motivation to write.

When I first started writing fan fiction over a year ago it was a project to improve my writing speed and skill. While I have always done reasonably well with writing I had never been particularly verbose or descriptive with it and I needed both of these things to produce a research report of high enough quality to complete my masters degree.

I succeeded in my goal of improving my writing skills and completing my degree. I have however largely come to the realization that I have failed as a writer in creating a story that grabs the readers attention and keeps their interest.

What is worse, judging by the reader response, I feel my efforts to understand the characters that I borrowed and keep them in character or show a logical motivation and progression to changing their behavior has been a complete waste of time as very few people besides me seem to care about this.

I have come to a realization that to get lots of interest in fan fiction and crossovers involving Ranma as the main character you need two things:

1) an automatically super Ranma (who cares how he got that way, or he does not act a thing like the actual character) capable of solving all the problems of another anime world.

2) lots of action (don't worry if the activity has nothing to do with the world Ranma is entering, or Ranma)

The short version of all this is writing is no longer fun for me, and has not been for some time.

Signing Off
Teturo

Yuri Fantasy

2009-06-02T09:17:00.000-07:00

Well my experiments with 3D artwork continue. Here is two new ones, they are the same pose one is just racier then the other.

Shadow Rise

2009-06-01T10:42:00.000-07:00

I have not been writing much the last couple of weeks. Since I finished school, I decided to finish playing through the copy of persona 4 I borrowed from some friends so I could get it returned to them. Not to mention playing with my new toy.

So here is the latest piece of Fan Art I have created, stepping away from Ranma for a bit. I created one of Shadow Rise from Persona 4. Cute but dangerous.

3D artwork

2009-05-30T20:25:00.000-07:00

Well I am starting to get motivated to write again. Playing persona 4 and my new toy are getting in the way a bit. Here is the further experiments in digital art I have created and mini stories to go with them.

Ranma walked into the suite he shared with his aunt and cousin. "So are we still going out for ice cream Kari-nee?"

Little Akiri perked up at this, but her mother grabbed her shoulder before she could run off. "Sis wants something first."

"And that is?" The young man asked.

"She thought a group picture would be nice." Kari smiled as Ranma's cabbit jumped up on the passthrough to the kitchenette with a digital camera in her paws.

Ranma looked at the young woman with a raised eyebrow. "Why do I get the feeling there is something your not telling me."

"Nothing really," Kari replied with a mischievous grin. "I just wanted to show her us girls getting ready for an ice cream run."

"Ah," Ranma sighed. "I see. You buying the ice cream?"

"So Kari-nee," Ranko asks lightly as they walk along the beach after getting ice cream. "How quickly can you change out of those conservative clothes if we wanted to really knock the food vendors out?"

"Who needs to change clothes?" Kari returns with a giggle. The younger girl lets out an incoherent squeal as she turns.

"Kari-mama!" Akiri shouts.

The red furred cabbit of the group lets out a giggle as she snaps another picture.

On a warm spring day a man walks through a small thicket, wondering at the beauty of nature around him so close to the city. Stumbling and twisting his ankle he suddenly realized that the city might be farther away then he would like.

"Would you like me to to come to your rescue?" A girl's voice asks from behind him. As he turns to look his eyes go wide in shock, and his pain is forgotten to the embrace of sweet oblivion.

The girl giggles as she looks down at his prone form.

"Tell me again why we are doing this." Paru asks the redhead with her on the beach blanket.

"Well we did talk quite a few of the others into posing for pictures for the website." Kari says with a grin down at her ministra.

Haruna Saotome snorts. "Like you really need an excuse to pose."

"And you do?" Kari snickers at the younger girl.

"Okay, enough talking.' Kazumi calls out. "Smile for the birdie!"

Training never stops, not even in heaven. This is just a pic I created to show off the model for Akiri

"What is with these costumes!" Ranko fairly screeched at her aunt.

"You said you wanted to have a photo of yourself and Inhoshi." Kari said with only a slight giggle. "You also let her pic the outfits."

"I wanted something attention grabbing." Ranko's golden eyed body double snickered at her glare. "I thought something like Hanaukyo Maid Team would be fun."

"Even the bed warmer trio in that did not wear anything like this!" Ranko shouted.

"But you promised." Inhoshi sniffled. "Please?"

As her cousin breaks down to the cabbit girl's pleas, Paru leans over to whisper in Kari's ear. "Funny how Ran-chan did not start to protest until after she put the outfit on."

New toy to play with

2009-05-21T16:55:00.000-07:00

I finally tried my hand at creating some artwork. I still can't draw but I found a 3D animation program that is fairly fun to work with called DAZ studio. Here is a couple of pictures I have created with it.

Crossover issues

2009-05-18T16:54:00.000-07:00

I admit, I only write crossovers.

I personally don't have a desire to simply change something in the story and try to rewrite all the cannon events.

Now the problems I have seen with a lot of crossovers I have read. Authors take characters from one story alter them significantly without a lot of explanation as to why, or try to sell them as cannon characters.

A few months ago, I was asked what I thought of a Ranma and Tenjou Tenge crossover. I said it had possibilities, but a lot of thought and study needed to go into how Ranma could fit into the world of Tenjou Tenge.

I realize now alarm bells should have gone of when the response was attend Todo and maybe work with the Juken club. Obvious answers really, real alarms should have sounded off when the gentleman admitted he did not know the story that well.

Now I will admit I am guilty of bashing on characters or stories. Mostly because I feel like it. When I started "In the Shadow of the Moon" I fully intended to send the amazons, from Ranma 1/2, in with magic weapons and thoroughly humiliate the sailor senshi.

The problem was after reading the Sailor Moon manga, don't ask me to watch the anime I really will rip into them, I just did not have the ire for it anymore. Sailor Moon is basically a romantic drama aimed at young teens, especially girls, with the magical defenders thrown in for added fantasy.

The story is so full of plot holes and inconsistencies it begs to be made fun of. Which is why it is so easy to work other things in. The story taken for what it is though is not bad. The characters are reasonably well developed and well human. Does not mean I can't poke some fun at them.

When you have no idea about the underlying systems that make up a story it is easy to put in random stuff because it sounds cool. My problem is that having absolutely no desire to understand the world your working with shows a basic lack of respect for the original work.

It defintely shows lazyness on the part of the authors involved.

I have no problem with characters growing or developing in ways you want, but not even trying to understand their basic motivations and showing some sort of progression in changing their behavior is insulting.

Now Uber Ranma goes to Todo. Of course he is going to pound on the newbie characters, there is no avoiding that if a fight starts. The better question is why would he suddenly take a fight seriously, just because he is at a new school would be reason for him to be more reserved in showing off his possible aces in the hole.

Having Ranma simply overpower someone likely to be at least physically on par with Ryoga is outside anything he could do in cannon even at the end of the series.

Ki enhancement also does not fly. While it is likely an underlying thing in Ranma, never is it specifically mentioned, nor has Ranma ever been shown to do any training in strength enhancement.

How strong is Ranma?

2009-05-18T09:36:00.000-07:00

Something has been bothering me in stories that I have been reading lately.

Just how strong are Ranma and Ryoga? One could easily say they are impressively strong, especially Ryoga, but just how physically powerful are they.

Lets start with Ryoga. The greatest argument for his strength over a long term is the umbrella he carries. Other instantaneous physical feats like pushing himself and Ranma into the air with one arm is impressive but less physically taxing then continually holding up his chosen weapon.

First we need to make a couple of quick assumptions about Ryoga. He and Ranma are about the same height and are definitely not the tallest male characters in the series, actually there is evidence that they might both be shorter then average. The average height for a adult male in Japan in around 5'7" (172 cm).

If we assume a height of 5'7" as a start, and go with the proportion theory that the length of a persons arms is around the same as their height from pictures we can see that the umbrella strapped to Ryoga`s back is slightly longer then half the span of his arms. Going with that let's say that it has a shaft one meter long. Now to find a volume we need a diameter. Assuming they have reasonably large hands then we can say perhaps the shaft of the umbrella is two inches (5 cm) wide.

So a quick calculation of volume using a cylinder. pi*r^2*h= 3.14*2.5^2*100= 1963.5 cm^3

now that we have a value for volume we can look at different metals it could be made of (or filled with) to find a weight. The most likely candidates are steel, iron, or lead.

Steel and iron have around the same density at 7.874 g/cm^3.

Lead is much heavier at 11.34 g/cm^3.

So to find a max let's look at lead. 11.34*1963.5 = 22,266.1 g or 22.2 kg = 49 lb

Steel would be both stronger and lighter then this.

Considering this could be a third to a half the weight of an average high school age boy in japan, it is not really that surprising they would find this very heavy. This still does not make it a superhuman feat to use.

Now to the crux of the problem. At the beginning of the series Ranma as a female did pick up the umbrella and hold it defensively, even opening it up to deflect Ryoga's bandannas. Even then this is not a superhuman feat to do, especially considering she kept it tucked in close to her body.

No where in the story after this did Ranma ever do heavy weight training to increase his strength beyond this in either form. Ranma`s training was extensively on speed.

No where was there any discussion of Ki enhanced strength, let alone Ranma learning techniques for it. On several occasions they show female Ranma lifting large chunks of ice or stone, but this was always an instantaneous action that involved lots of adrenalin and leverage.

Now for the biggest argument I could offer against Uber Ranma. Regardless of how strong he might be, outside of a life or death situation why would he reveal so much about his abilities to an opponent?

Ranma is a secretive individual by nature. He almost never in the series talked about his past with anyone, the only exception would be him discussing the dragon's wisker.

Almost all exposition about the past was done by Genma so he could try to portray himself in the best possible light.

Hallelujah

2009-05-05T15:06:00.000-07:00

Not really related to the stories here, other then getting rid of roadblocks to working on them.

Now I have a real reason to celebrate, I have completed my defense and just have a few edits left to submit my master`s report and get my degree.

So to celebrate let me show you the newest picture I had created. For once a male Ranma gets to show off his charm.
The characters in the picture are Ranma Kadoya, a.k.a Kamen Rider Decade from "Anime Rider Worlds", and Natsuki Kuga a.k.a Kamen Rider Yuki Ookami from "In the Shadow of the Moon".

New story announcement

2009-04-14T20:43:00.000-07:00

Well I am not dead, just feel like it sometimes with crunch time coming up on getting my master`s research finished. Needed a short mental break so I cooked up a new story called Ah My Rider. Crossing together Ah Megami Sama with Kamen Rider Den-O, and then throwing Ranma into it. Working on it with Den-O`s help so he gets to post it on media miner.

Naughty Kittens

2009-04-04T15:28:00.000-07:00

My Ranma has discovered a secret that the girls around him discovered a long time ago. Teasing the cute boy is fun.

Now Ranko, with her wing girl Inhoshi, gets to try this out on a prime target Ranma Kadoya (Kamen Rider Decade from Anime Rider Worlds)

Den-O climax jump music videos

2009-04-04T13:25:00.000-07:00

I don't know why but I find these videos entertaining.

Citrus Side Stories

2009-03-23T07:28:00.000-07:00

Well it has been asked for and I simply can not resist the chance, unfortunately there is no point to writing something citrus if there is no detail to it. So I can't post these side stories on Fanfiction.net like I normally would. So I took the time to bring the copy of my story on mediaminer.org up to date and post the side stories there. Here is a link to the first one.

http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php/160649/563905/

Video for Anime Rider Worlds

2009-03-18T12:31:00.000-07:00

A friend made this video for the new story project I am helping out with. It is split into two parts I will post the second one later.

update 3/21/09. here is the full video

Videos of Natsuki

2009-03-16T07:01:00.000-07:00

Sorry I just can't resist

There are times I have felt sorry for Ryoga

2009-03-16T05:21:00.000-07:00

This is most definitely not one of them.

Pictures of clothing characters are wearing

2009-03-03T07:54:00.000-08:00

Here is a picture of the robes that Tomoyo is wearing at the end of chapter 46. If your familiar with Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle it should look familiar.

Here is a picture of the dress Mana is wearing after Noriko helps Yoruichi release her from the geas. Aside from looking nice this is also the only clothing she wears in the manga where she does not have her hair ties.

I am not normally one to use the term Kawaii but damn.

2009-02-25T05:00:00.000-08:00

This picture turned out better than I had hoped for.

explanation: this is just a group picture of all the girls that live in a suite in the Mahora coed dormitory. With Kari basically being the big sister/mother figure.

Inhoshi is Ranko's cabbit that is perched on her head.

Ranko simply owns gothloli fashion in that dress.

Kari is trying to be mature and responsible, and embrace everyone with her wings.

The little girl is Akiri, Kari's modified cabbit/daughter, I described the outfit she wore in the story, but I am not sure many people recognized what Tomoyo had based the cute outfit off of. So I decided to have her wear it here. Ordinarily Akiri happily goes around the school wearing cute dresses too.

Mothers and daughters

2009-02-21T14:27:00.000-08:00

I made connections between two anime/manga series and Negima, and I just wanted to take a moment to offer up evidence for why I think this is likely

The first is Konoka(Negima) being the daughter of Tomoyo (Card Captor Sakura, Tsubasa Reservoir Chronical)

Just looking at the similarity in their features was what prompted me to make the connection. Well actually, what finally settled it was having to go back through a chapter repeatedly and put Tomoyo's name where I had written Konoka, and vice versa.

Last we have Mana (Negima) and Yoruichi from Bleach, again the similarity in features prompted this association.

I am sure that you are likely here to see something else, but thank you if you paused to read this.

Rei's Imagination

2009-02-21T14:23:00.000-08:00

Well here is the picture you are most likely looking for. If you really like it go check out the other pictures by the artist over at http://thong-revolution.com

explanation: This is the product of the Senshi of Fire's, Hino Rei, imagination after being exposed to Kari's , the older girl in picture, wind based enchantress magic. Kari was wearing this outfit at the time and mentioned setting a good example for her niece, Ranko, who Rei had recently seen naked in the bath.

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Pactio

2009-02-16T20:26:00.001-08:00

It has been a bit since I posted anything here, but I was wandering through the web and found pactio cards for Ranma's Ministra, except for Inhoshi

List updates posted

2008-11-23T19:40:00.000-08:00

Well I finally updated all of the lists. check them out if you want to see the tangled family tree as it stands and the crossover series.

Current series crossovers

2008-10-25T19:08:00.000-07:00

Here is the list of active characters in the story "In the Shadow of the Moon" organized by series

Ranma 1/2
(Saotome)Himura Ranma
(Saotome)Himura Nodoka
Tendo Akane
Tendo Nabiki
Tendo Kasumi
Konatsu
(Kunoji)Himura Ukyo
(Cologne) Ku Lon
(Shampoo) Xian Pu
(Mousse) Mu Se

Ruroni Kenshin
Kamiya Kaoru (Noriko past)
Himura Kenji

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha
Intelligent magical devices
Yagami Hayate (mentioned)
Zafira

Mahou Sensei Negima

Negi Springfield
(Murakami)Inugami Kotaro
Konoe Eishun

the whole of class 3-A but especially
Nagase Kaede
Asakura Kazumi
Evangeline A.K. McDowell
Saotome Haruna (Paru)
Miyazaki Nodoka (Honya)
Sakurazaki Setsuna
Konoe Konoka
Tatsumiya Mana

Sailor Moon
Scouts:
Tsukino Usagi -Sailor Moon
Mizuno Ami -Sailor Mercury
Hino Rei -Sailor Mars
Kino Makoto -Sailor Jupiter
Aino Minako -Sailor Venus
Tenou Haruka -Sailor Uranus
Kaiou Michiru -Sailor Neptune
Tomoe Hotaru -Sailor Saturn

Moon Cats - Mau:
Artemis - white, Venus' advisor
Luna - Black, Moon's advisor

Tenchi Muyo
Hakubi Washu (Noriko past)
Cabbits
Kuramitsu Mitoto

Tsubasa Reservoir Chronical
Li Syaoran II
Princess Sakura
Fay D. Flourite
Kurogane
Mokona Modoki
Fei Wang Reed
Ichihara Yuko

Cardcaptor Sakura
Clow Reed
(Kinomoto) Li Sakura
Daidoji Tomoyo
(Mizuki) Tatsumiya Kaho
(Hiiragizawa) Tatsumiya Eriol
Kinomoto Toya

Guardians:
Kero - Kerberos
Tsukishiro Yukito - Yue
Spinel - Spinel Sun
Akizuki Nakuru - Ruby Moon

Steel Angel Kurumi
Kurumi
Saki
Karinka

Bleach
Shihoin Yoruichi
Urahara Kisuke
Tsukabashi Tessai
Hanakari Jinta
Tsumugiya Ururu

Angelic Layer
angels:
Athena
Hikaru
Suzuka

characters:
Asami Shoko
Mihara Ichiro
Mihara (Suzuhara) Shuko
Mihara (Suzuhara) Misaki
Kobayashi Hatoko
Kobayashi Kotaro
Kizaki Tamayo
Mihara Ohjiro

Full Metal Panic:
Whispered
Mithril
Chidori Kaname
Sagara Sousuke
Teletha Testarossa
sgt. Kurz Weber
Sgt. Major Melissa Mao
Lord Mallory

Ghost in the Shell:
Tachikoma

Girls Bravo:
(Mao) Kosame
Hayate

Full Metal Alchemist:
Edward Elric
Alphonse Elric
Winry Rockbell

Mai Hime:
Sugiura Midori
Kuga Natsuki
Minagi (Kanzaki) Reito
Minagi Mikoto
Okuzaki Akira

Original Characters
Himura Noriko
Himura Kari

Kuramitsu Mikaro - Ku Fei's Father

Amazons:
(Mascara)Mas Cre
(Brush)Bru Xi
(Pomade)Po Mad
(Buffer)Bu Fer
(Perfume)Par Fum
(Hair Bow)Har Bo
(Scrunchi)Xin Chi

(Curry) Ku Ri -Ku Fei's mother

Cabbits:
Inhoshi
(Karakuri)Himura Akiri
Akatsukiyami
Shugotenshi
Obiru
Kitsune

2008-10-24T18:49:00.000-07:00

Here we have the link to the picture of Sakurazaki Setsuna as a pink bunny during Mahora Fest.

Setsuna Bunny

Here is the link to find out who among the Negima 3-A girls would be a good match with you.

Compatibility

My three best matches overall seem to be Nagase Kaede 75%, Kugimiya Madoka 77%, and Akashi Yuna 70%. Though at 100% Miyazaki Nodoka and I would be great sports partners :)

2008-10-22T15:40:00.000-07:00

I suppose it is about time I make a list of relationships in my story "In the shadow of the moon".